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The aim of this report is present what is popular in Indonesia. I interviewed 5 of my friends by chatting and in person. The question concerned food and sport.
FOOD: NASI PADANG
Nasi padang is a traditional food from indonesia, there's a lot of food in nasi padang like 'ayam balado', 'sayur nangka', and many more. Mostly padang food contain a lot of coconut milk or we call it curry food.
100% people that i interviewed agree that nasi padang is original from Indonesia they said they can't find an original nasi padang in another country. The fact is nasi padang come from Indonesia, in another country many restaurant serve nasi padang but, the taste is different. Nasi padang serve for the first time in Padang, West Sumatera.
Many people said that 'Beef Randang' and 'Squid Curry' is a favourite menu in Nasi Padang, it's very tasty. Besides ayam pop and egg curry there's a lot of tasty menu in nasi padang like fish head curry, chicken curry, ayam pop and many more.
SPORT: SOCCER
Soccer is a favourite sport in Indonesia. When Indonesian Soccer team (PSSI) playing against another country, the supporter's getting crazy, they came from jakarta and outside jakarta to support PSSI.
90% people i interviewed said that Indonesia Soccer team are getting better, because they can beat an international team with a high score. 10% people said Indonesia Soccer team didn't change anything.
Indonesian Soccer Team player getting better from the first. People that i interviewed said soccer player are better than the first because they practice from defeat. Indonesian Soccer Team player prove that they can defeat an international team with win 4-3 against Turkemenistan.
BY: HASIF SYAHRASTANI (15/XB)
I'm Ihsan Aring Trisarjono from group 6
ReplyDeleteNice entry Hasif. Easy to read and understandable. I can get the main idea from each topic.
I'll just revise if there are some missing words. For example: "The aim of this report is present" to "The aim of this report is (to) present" and "Indonesian Soccer Team player getting better" you can change it to, "Indonesian Soccer Team player(s) (is/are) getting better"
Next is on your capitalizations. Some words need to change, like "indonesia" to "Indonesia", "jakarta" to "Jakarta" and any other names.
And maybe you should pay attention on punctuation mark. "..nasi padang is original from Indonesia they said.." you should put (,) after the word "Indonesia".
But still, it's a good essay.