The aim of this report is to present what is popilar in Turkey. I interviewed five of my friends directly in class. The questions concerned music, food, and public transportation.
Music : Music that originally from Indonesia is dangdut and it is a traditional song of Indonesian people. And I interviewed my friends, what does he think about Indonesian favorite music, and all of it says that Indonesian people more likely a western songs like rock, pop, etc.
Food : There are many traditional food that comes from many province in Indonesia like tumpeng, rendang, pecel, etc. And I interviewed my friends, what does he think about Indonesian favourite food and 4 of 5 people said that Indonesian like his country dish. 3 of 5 people said they like tumpeng, and 2 of 5 people said they like rendang.
Public Transport: This thing is one of the important thing for some people that does not own a car, and in Indonesia there are many public transportation like Bus, Bajaj, Becak, etc. And I interviewed my friends, what does he think about Indonesian favourite transportation and all of it choose own car but if they has to pick a public transportation. 2 of 5 people choose Bus, and 2 of 5 people too choose Taxi and the other is Angkot.
The surprising fact is most of Indonesian people like their country food and that was good news that we should proud of our traditional food.
by: Azhar Rhozaq A(9) XB
After reading your essay, I think it's really interesting. However, I have some comment for you.
ReplyDeleteIn the Music section, I think this sentence "Music that originally from Indonesia is dangdut and it is a traditional song of Indonesian people." shoud be shortened, like you just give its point, like "Dangdut is one of Indonesian traditional song". And from the public transport section, there's a sentence "This thing is one of the important thing". I thing using the word "This thing is one of the important thing" is inefficient.
Also, there is word "What does he think", I think it's better to use "What do they think" because you interviewed more than 1 people. And in the first paragraph, in the introduction, there's a typo such as "popilar" should be popular. And you invterviewed Indonesian people, not Turkey.
For the formatting, I think it's better to give a space between the topic title and the result, for example after food you give an "enter" than write the result under.
I think the conclusion is good, but it isn't complete because its only reviewed about food, so I think you should add about the music & public transport reviews.
But afterall, you essay is really understandable and really great to read.
Athira Presialia, Group6 XB